해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
Sure, actually, both sessions which talk about interest rates are scheduled on the same day, on day 2nd on April 8th, on Tuesday which is the second day of the seminar. The first session, from 9:30 a.m. to 11.30 a.m. talks is about the interest rate forecast forecasts and will be presented by Jane Kim. And the third session, which starts from 2:00 p.m. to 3:30 p.m. on the same day, talks is about a fixed versus variable interest rates, also spoken and it will also be presented by Jane Kim.
-> 질문에 대한 답변을 정말 잘 해주셨지만 조금 더 자연스럽게 수정해봤습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다




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