해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This picture was taken on in an office hallway. There is one a man and one a woman standing in front of a printer and They are both wearing a suits. business suits. The man with a beard is wearing a gray suit with a gray color, and the woman is wearing a black suit with a black color. In the background, I can see another man and woman standing farther down There is one woman and one man all the way down the hallway. looking at the couple in front of the hall, in front of the printer. The windows are made of glasses.
They seem to be looking toward the people near the printer. I can also see large glass windows, and the office looks bright and modern.
-> 주어진 그림에 대한 묘사에 어색함이 발견되어 전반적인 수정이 필요했습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다
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