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I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment. That's because there are many gym, there are many equipment in gym, so I can exercise easily. And is a lot of equipment at the gym, so I can work out more effectively. Also, I can do exercise anytime I want. So, it feels less stressful. And I can be stay motivated by others watching other people exercise. So I can do my exercise more harder, harder. As a result, I can push myself harder. That’s why I think it is better to exercise in a gym.
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