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효효 | 2026.07.15 | 조회 32
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교재 코멘트 따라 아래와 같이 저만의 스크립트를 작성하였는데, 부족한 부분이 많아 첨삭 부탁드립니다.

-The person I’d like to talk about is the lady next door.

Every time with meet, we welcome each other happily.

Regarding her appearance, she’s got brown eyes and brown curly hair.

she used not to wear glasses, but now she wears them and

looks a lot younger than her age.

as for her personality, she’s a bit laid-back women.

she’s also a great women who beat cancer.

so, what I like the most about her is toughness. I always want her to be healty.

I think i’m lucky to have such a good neighbor.




읽어주셔 감사합니다.

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