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I think it is better in a gym. Sorry, I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment because a gym has a very, very, the gym has various machines, so I exercise. I can exercise too many equipment, for example, a running machine and pull-up, that outdoor has not. it has various kinds of exercise equipment. For example, I can use a treadmill, a pull-up machine, and weight machines. I can’t usually find those outdoors. Also, I can work out comfortably regardless of the weather. That’s why I prefer going to the gym.
-> 질문에 대한 답변이 전반적으로 어색하고 부족해 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
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