해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This picture was taken at the in an office hallway. I see a two co-workers standing outside the near a printer. A The man is holding a piece of paper, and a the woman is looking at it. I think they are checking some documents. And in the background, I can see a wall made of glass and a man and a woman stand back of it. glass wall, and behind it, there are another man and woman standing.
-> 그림에 대한 묘사를 잘 해주셨지만 다소 어색한 문장이 발견되어 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다
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