해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This picture was taken outdoors. The first thing I can see from in this picture is two people. They are planting flowers. One of them is an old woman, and the other is an old man who has with white hair. I can feel from this picture they are very peaceful. They look very peaceful, and I think they are enjoying gardening together.
-> 사소한 실수가 발견되어 수정이 필요했습니다. 주어진 그림에 대한 조금 더 구체적인 묘사가 이루어져야 할 것 같습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다
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