해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
There are two sessions regarding about interest rates. So the first session is on day two, session one, and it’s about Interest rate forecasts. And the second session is on day two, session three, on the same day, day two, and that will be regarding it’s about Fixed vs. Variable Interest Rates. Both sessions will be held led by Jane Kim, so if you're interested, I highly recommend you to take these sessions on day two.
-> 답변을 잘 해주셨으나 조금 더 자연스러운 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다
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