해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I don't go to restaurants outside my this neighborhood very often because they are too it is very expensive to me. Also, and there are usually a lot of many people waiting, so I don’t like waiting in line. on the restaurant. So I did not go to restaurant often. That’s why I don’t go to those restaurants very often.
-> 어색한 문장이 많이 발견되어 전반적인 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다
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