해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This picture was taken in an office. in the middle of the picture, there are two people They are facing each other. On the right side of the picture, there is a copy machine. For the instance, there are The two people, and they are wearing suits and they seem to be talking to each other. In the background of the picture, there are two other people standing. I like this picture because it reminds me of my coworkers.
-> 자신의 생각보다 주어진 그림에 대한 묘사를 구체적으로 해주시는 것이 중요합니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다
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