해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This picture was taken in an office. There are is four people in the picture. person, and two person is Two people are talking about some papers and they are talking in front of the copy machine. And there is an empty desk and a chair in the foreground. And two person is looking at the two person in front of a copy machine.In the background, two other people are looking toward the two people in front of the copy machine.
-> 주어진 그림에 대한 묘사가 부족합니다. 또한 문법적 오류가 많이 발견됩니다. 조금 더 구체적으로 완벽한 문장을 구사하시는 것이 좋을 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다
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