해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This picture was taken at an office. The first thing I can see from the in this picture is two people. They are talking to each other. In the background of picture, I can see two people standing together. Everyone is wear a suit. It seems very quiet.
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