해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
Yeah, I often go to red outside this neighborhood. I and my family and I go out to eat outside about once a week because having a meal together it makes us more happier just by meal with our family. And happy. Also, the delicious menu of the restaurant refreshes our atmosphere. eating delicious food at a restaurant helps us relax and refresh our mood.
-> 주어진 질문에 대한 의도를 잘 파악하셨으나 전반적으로 어색한 문장이 많아 수정이 필요했습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다
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