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I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment. There are some several reasons to support my opinion. First, even if when the weather is so bad, we can work out in a gym with equipment. Also, I like enjoy exercising with various types of equipment many equipments. When I was a high school student, I worked out in a gym for five hours a day. So I think it is better to exercise in the gym with equipment.
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