해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I think This picture was taken in an office. In the middle of the picture, a man and a woman are standing at the near a copy machine. and a The man is holding a some documents, and next to him, a the woman is holding a cup. Behind them, two other people are standing. and all of them are wearing a suits.
-> 그림에 잘 묘사해 주셨지만 어색한 부분이 발견되어 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다
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