해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This is picture was taken in an office. The first thing I can see in this picture is four people. In the middle of the picture, I can see a two people. he is holding a paper some documents and he has a beard. On the right side of the picture, I can see a two people. They are standing. working on the street. Most of them are wearing shoes. All of they are wearing suits. In the middle of the picture, I can see a chair.
-> 주어진 그림에 대해 잘 묘사해 주셨지만 조금 더 정확한 묘사를 위해 수정이 필요했습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다
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