해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
My favorite item on the menu is kimbap. There are many types of kimbap so you can try everything.is a popular Korean food made with rice, vegetables, and other ingredients rolled in seaweed. It looks a little like sushi, but it has a different taste. There are many different types of kimbap, so you can try a variety of them.
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