해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment. Because there are many various different types of equipment. So we have many can do various types for exercise. In my case, when I was last year, I went to a gym near my house. I suddenly thought that I can could lose weight. if I worked out regularly, so I started going to the gym.
-> 주어진 시간 안에 자신의 의견을 조금 더 구체적으로 말씀해 주시면 좋을 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
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