해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
This picture was taken in an office. The first thing i can see in this picture There is a man holding on the some papers. Next to him, there is a woman looking at the papers. In the background of the picture, I can see a large window. two people standing. Everyone in the picture is wearing a suit. I can also see a large window.
-> 조금 더 구체적인 묘사가 이루어진다면 좋은 점수를 받으실 수 있을 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다
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