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해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 2회차 Q11 첨삭부탁드립니다.

Q11. 일에서 가장 중요한 건 돈인가

I disagree with the following statement.

because there are several important aspect more than money a person earns.

First, it is the location. if the workplace is far from people house, they may feel tired easily, and it will be stressful, be it takes a lot of time commuting, 

so they can not save time and energy. 

second, I think it is important to compensid? when people... working.. big company.

they can learn many things and get a lot of knowledge and experience about the job.

and also,, even though they sh?? a lot of effort to the work, it will be a good experience.