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해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 Q11 첨삭부탁드립니다.
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해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 Q11 첨삭부탁드립니다.

Q11. 야외 운동 vs 헬스장 운동 중 선호하는 것은?
I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.
First, because it is convenient. There is a
community center which has fitness center, and all the residents who live in my apartment goes there.
also, there is my friend, I can meet my friends there, 
so, I like to go to the fitness center and exercise with the equipment.
second, I can save the money.
I'm always very tight with the budget. but, the fitness center is in the community center and It's only for the residents
so it's more cheaper than the other fitness center.
so, I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.


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