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Q11. 야외 운동 vs 헬스장 운동 중 선호하는 것은?
I believe it's much better to exercise outdoors rather than in a gym with equipment, for the following reasons. 
To begin with, if you go outside to exercise and get some fresh air, and relieve some stress from your daily life,
if, it's great weather, then it's much better for you. 
so, and also, I read some paper, that outdoor activities or outdoor exercise
will help you a lot more to grow your muscles or enhance your cardio vascular functions
rather than working out in a gym with equipment indoors.
so, these are the reasons, why I believe that it's much better to exercise outdoors.
so yeah thank you for listening.



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