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해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 Q11 첨삭부탁드립니다.
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해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 Q11 첨삭부탁드립니다.

Q11. 야외 운동 vs 헬스장 운동 중 선호하는 것은?
It is better to exercise in a gym with equipment..for a few reasons.
Firstly, gym for me, the gym is really convenient.
I have a gym really near from my home, I can get there just by walking 5 minutes.
and secondly, they also, have good and many facilities.
So I can do many exercise for them.
but If I exercise in oudoors, I just can do.. I can't use the facilities.
I just have to move out with my own body.
So I think that's not good for my health.
So I would rather go out for a gym with equipment.
So overall, that's it.


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