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해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 Q11 첨삭부탁드립니다.

Q11. 야외 운동 vs 헬스장 운동 중 선호하는 것은?

I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment. because if you exercise in a gym,



First of all, you don't have to care[또는 worry]
about the weather conditions.



For example, in summer, it's so hot to
exercise outside,
I don’t like to exercise outside
because it is too hot.
so you can Instead,
I can
just easily go to the gym, and do
whatever you exercise I want.



also Likewise, in winter, when it is too cold or snow can come snowy,



so you can just go to gym, and.. just
exercise whenever you want
I
can exercise in the gym not having to care about the weather
.



Also, Second, you I can
use various types of equipment, so it is good which
helps me exercise effectively. I can develop different target muscles by using
different equipment.



These are the reasons why
I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.



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