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해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 Q11 첨삭부탁드립니다.

Q11. 야외 운동 vs 헬스장 운동 중 선호하는 것은?

Yes, I think it is better to exercise, uh,
in a gym with equipment.



There are some reasons. First, if I exercise in a gym with equipment, it is
more comfortable convenient than outdoor
exercise
exercising outdoors. [
또는, exercising
in a gym with equipment is more convenient than exercising outdoors]



and also regardless,, of weather
conditions, I can work out in a gym with equipment.



so it is very convenient. This is because I can work out in a gym
with equipment regardless of weather conditions.



In my case,
three years ago, it rained a lot.. at that time during
summer. The rain was so heavy I couldn’t exercise outdoors.



but..uh, regardless of bad weather
conditions, I could work out in a gym with equipment.



so it was very convenient to me. So I was able to consistently work out
during the rainy season.



So I think this way.



Second, exercising in the
gym is beneficial since there are professional trainers that could give
guidance through our exercise. With their help, I can exercise effectively.



Therefore, I believe it
is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.



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