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해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 Q7 첨삭부탁드립니다.

Q7. 동네 밖 레스토랑에 자주 가는 편인가

Actually I want to go to restaurant
outside this, my neighborhood,

but I don't... I usually don't go to
there.

In fact, no, I do not
usually go to restaurants outside this neighborhood.

I would love to, but restaurants
outside my neighborhood are more expensive.

because I'm a student, so my budget
is too tight.

so I don't have enough money to go to there
restaurants outside this neighborhood.

하.. so sad situation, it and my home is
more cheaper than eat at restaurant.

Therefore, I tend to eat
at home, and when I want to go out, I usually stay in my neighborhood.

-> 차분하게 말하는 것은 좋으나 문장 끝을 얼버무리는 경향이 있어
전달력이 다소 떨어집니다.점수에 영향 갈 수 있으니 조금 더 명확하게 이야기하는 연습을 하면 좋겠습니다.