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첨삭지기 | 2023.11.16 | 조회 110

안녕하세요 H목표입니다. 분량
괜찮은가요? ㅠ 오류 등 모든 지적 부탁드립니다 !! 감사합니다
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There are many things to say. First, I’m
gonna talk about a the sofa in my home.
it is really big and soft.. when I sit on a the
sofa, I’m I feel really happy. because it
makes me fell feel so relaxed. these days
I have too much stress because of studying. but my sofa can helps me.
and anyway I like my a desk. it is a brown wooden desk. this is so
important in my life. because I always use it for studying, doing homework,
making a report and so on... so In my opinion, these are really useful in my
life.



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