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첨삭지기 | 2023.11.16 | 조회 102

IH 목표입니다 분량 괜찮은가요? 모든
지적 부탁드립니다 감사합니다 ㅎㅎ



 



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Last February, at the time there was a
brown sofa in my living room. this sofa was old-fashioned and it was got
had gotten worn out. this was my favorite
furniture. but I had to throw it away and buy a new one. I didin’t wanna do
this.. it was what it was.. cos my mom said “ Jun, throw it away outside, I’ll chage
get you a new one”. after that my mom bought a new one. and then now I use a new sofa in
that is blue. To be honest, I like my new sofa.
it’s so much bigger than my old sofa. and it helps me relax whenever I’m tired,
so overall, I ended up falling in love with my new sofa.



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