해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 Q10 첨삭부탁드립니다.

Do you think it is better to exercise outdoors or in a gym with equipment?

Support your answer with reasons or examples.

I think exercise in a gym is better. It is better to exercise in a gym.

Because in a gym I use many equipments You can use a lot of exercise equipment, 

and if you want you run to exercise to trainer 

Also you can using a showe booth.

You can use the shower booth after running and training.

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