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첨삭지기 | 2023.11.22 | 조회 116

Q1. I
would like to know about your neighbors. Who are they? What do they do? How often
do you interact with them?



A1. Honestly,
I have only seen saw my neighbors once. We met in the elevator. We just passed them when we left the elevator. That’s it. We didn’t say hello to each other or talk about anything
at all. So, I don’t know who they are and what they do.



 



Q2. Can
you tell me about an interesting or memorable experience you have had in your neighborhood?
Tell me about the experience in detail and explain what made it so memorable.



A2. In
my neighborhood, there is a large exhibition hall. I went there the exhibition with my mother
a few months ago. That is was about coffee and bakery. There were various
type of coffee beans and desserts and We can could try them. So, we were
constantly eating for 2 hours. I think it is the  memorable thing. because I can could eat different
kind of desserts in one place and of course everything was free.



 

-> 조금 더 시제를 염두하여 문장을 만드시면 좋을 것 같습니다.




Q3. How has
your neighborhood changed from when you were young? Describe in detail how it
was in the past, and how it is now.



A3. When
I was young, my hometown didn’t have high-rise apartment buildings. But after many
years of construction, a lot of apartments over 40 floors have been created. Also,
a department store and many facilities such as convenient stores, cafes and
restaurants were built near that place. So, now my neighborhood is becoming a convenient
place to live.


-> 마지막 질문에 대한 답변 너무 좋습니다.



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