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첨삭지기 | 2023.11.25 | 조회 111
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Schools should prohibit students from using electronic devices such as smart phones or laptops at school.



->i think schools should not prohibit students from using electronic devices such as smart phones or laptops at school.
because electronic devices as smart phones or laptops have many information. 
For example, One of the mobile app gerne is a study application made for studying. 
it is helped to teach for students. It helps to teach students. 
Also, Coding is a trend issue. it must need electronic devices. You need an electronic device to code.
For these reasons, I think schools should not prohibit students from using electronic devices such as smart phones or laptops at school.

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