해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 Q4 첨삭부탁드립니다

I can see that this picture that is taken in the office. 

The picture is mostly focus on two people 

-> 중심이 되는 인물부터 나열하는 게 좋을 것 같습니다.

I can see There is a man who is printing a paper and talking with a woman who is carrying a cup of coffee.

There is a desk, a chair and a tablet on the desk behind two people 

And I can see the other people who are walking to them.

※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다