해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 Q11 첨삭부탁드립니다

I think it is better than to exercise outdoors. is better.

-> 긴 문장보다, 정확한 문장을 표현하는 것이 중요합니다.

Because I think it was felt a little bit bored to me. when I doing exercised in a gym with equipment.

-> 내가 느낀 감정이기 때문에 ing가 아닌 ed형을 사용하는 것이 적절합니다.

If I doing exercise at outdoors, I can see flowers, or trees, and feel and hear nature’s things. 

I think it is more good better to for me. So I think it is better to exercise outdoors.

※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다