첨삭 부탁드립니다.
I can see There are two other people standing behind them.
I think this picture was taken in an office.
In the middle of the picture, A man is holding some documents.
And he is wearing a grey suit.
Next to him, A woman is looking at the documents.
She is wearing a black suit.
There is a printer on the right side of the picture I can see a print.
->문장 구조를 바꾸면 조금 더 자연스러울 것 같습니다.
-> 전반적으로 너무 잘 묘사해 주셨습니다:) 수고하셨습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다





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