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I think Exercising outdoors is better than exercising in a gym with equipment.
First of all, It is good to exercise with my friends.
Second, You can see everywhere when you exercise outdoors.
Those two reasons that make made me think it’s better to exercise outdoors than to exercise in a gym with equipment. exexercise outdoors is good than gym with the exercise with equipment at gym.
->답변에 대한 근거가 다소 부족해 보입니다. 일관적이며, 구체적인 이유를 제시해 주시는게 중요할 것 같습니다.
수고하셨습니다.
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