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박*현 | 2023.12.15 | 조회 68
해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 Q11 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I think to exercise in a gym with equipment is better.
Let me explain why I think this way.
First, in the rainy day, I can exercise.
I can’t exercise outdoors in rainy day.
So, it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.
Second, I can exercise a lot and new things.
Because there are many equipment.
So, I can learn how to exercise with equipment.
Therefore, I think to exercise in a gym with equipment is better.


※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.




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