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김**f | 2023.12.19 | 조회 71
해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 Q11 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.
For the following reasons.
In my case, I usually go to the gym to exercise.
It’s because I can try many kinds of equipments.
And second there are many skills expert.
So, I can learn how to use the equipment exactly.
So, I can do exercise better.
Last one is I can motivated by others to exercise.
So, I can exercise regularly and free complete.
Therefore I think thus way.

※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.




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