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I often go to restaurants near my house by for two reasons.

First, It is very delicious for me to eat.

As the food outside suits my taste, I often go out and buy food.

So, I want to go restaurant.

Second, There are delicious restaurants close to my house.

it is very near by my house.

So, It is easy to visit.I convince for to go.

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※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.