해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I think it is better to exercise outdoors.
Because when we exercise outdoors.
There are many activities we can do.
When I was young, l do a lot of outdoors activities such as playing tennis, swimming and soccer as all.
As a result I can lose my weight and my health is improve.
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