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첨삭부탁드립니다!
한*영 | 2023.12.30 | 조회 62
해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I think exercise gym with equipment is the better.
Because the equipment is made by person who studied for the human’s body.
So It can make our bodies healthy.
And the trainer who studied about the equipments is always working at the gym.
They can help people that new comes use equipment more.


※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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