해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I think that I was better to exercising outdoors was better for me.
It made makes me feel better and I could smell the can breathe a fresh air.
And another reason that I could can see many the lots of the plants pets,
and walkers there and the pats and the walking people.
-> 시제 사용에 유의하셔야 할 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다:)
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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