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토익스피킹 2회차 첨삭부탁드립니다.
윤*미 | 2024.01.05 | 조회 55
해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스  첨삭부탁드립니다.

I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.
There are a few reasons for this.
First, there are some trainer teachers.
So, I can ask questions and get quick responses.
Second, I can wash my body after exercise.
It makes me relieve stress and relax.
I can refresh my mind and take a mental break.
So I think exercise in a gym is better than exercise in outdoors.


※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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