해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.
There are a few reasons for this.
First, there are some always trainers teachers.
So, I can ask questions and get quick responses.
Second, I can wash my body after exercising exercise.
It makes me relieve reduce stress and relax.
I can refresh my mind and take a mental break.
So I think exercise exercising in a gym is better than exercising exercise in outdoors.
->사소한 실수를 제외하고 전반적으로 잘 작성해 주셨습니다. 수고하셨습니다:)
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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