해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
Yes, I often go to restaurants outside in my neighborhood.
Because I like food to try various foods and I love to spend time eating outside with my friends.
-> 문장이 조금 다듬어지면 더 좋을 것 같습니다.
I go to restaurants outside for about 5 times a week.
If you come to my neighborhood, I would recommend some of the good restaurants.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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