해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 첨삭부탁드립니다.
I think it is better to exercise outdoors.
Most of all I can relieve stress.
When I was young, I went to a park. So I enjoy jogging at the park.
As a result I like to exercise outdoors.
Therefore it is better to exercise outdoors.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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