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I think it’s better to so exercise outdoors is better.
First, most of all when If you go outside, there are You can feel the fresh air and sunlight.
In my case, I like sunlight.sunrise. So, it motivates me to exercise outside.
Secondly, when If I exercise in a gym, it is I will be very stressed that I have to go to the gym every day.
Therefore to exercise outdoor is better. I think it’s better to exercise outdoors
->문법에서 많은 오류가 발견됩니다. 완벽한 문장을 만드시는 것이 중요할 것 같습니다.
※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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