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토익스피킹 첨삭부탁드립니다.
전*관 | 2024.01.12 | 조회 39
해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

I think it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.
Most of all there are various exercise equipment.
About one years ago, I register in a gym.
So, I could use many kind of exercise equipment.
As a result l lost about five kilo of weight.
It is successful experience.
Therefore it is better to exercise in a gym with equipment.


※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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