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i think it’s better to exercise in a gym with equipment 

for the following reasons,

First, most of all there are many equipment to exercise in a gym

So I can try various kinds of equipment.

in these days it’s cold weather i can’t go outside to exercise so i register a gym near by my house 

Second, I don’t have to think about weather 

it’s so cold these days that i can’t go outside to exercise.

so i’ve registered for a gym near by my house 

Now i can exercise whenever I want in there.

Therefore I think it’s better to exercise in a gym with equipment.

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