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i think gym is better to exercise it’s better to exercise in a gym with equipment.
most of all i can run exercise inside regardless of the weather.
And I can exercise safely with a trainer.
for example i exercise outdoor and i hurt a lot
but i exercise in a gym with trainer i don’t hurt
About 2 years ago, i exercised outside alone without anyone’s help and
got hurt a lot
so i think exercise in a gym is better
Through this experience, I came to think that exercising in the gym with equipment is better than exercising outdoors
-> 주어진 시간에 맞게끔 질문에 대한 답변을 준비하셔야 할 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.
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