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RE:토익스피킹 첨삭답변드립니다.
첨삭지기 | 2024.01.14 | 조회 31
해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.


i think gym is better to exercise  it’s better to exercise in a gym with equipment.

most of all i can run exercise inside regardless of the weather.

And I can exercise safely with a trainer.


for example i exercise outdoor and i hurt a lot 

but i exercise in a gym with trainer i don’t hurt

About 2 years ago, i exercised outside alone without anyone’s help and 

got hurt a lot 


so i think exercise in a gym is better 

Through this experience, I came to think that exercising in the gym with equipment is better than exercising outdoors


-> 주어진 시간에 맞게끔 질문에 대한 답변을 준비하셔야 할 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.



※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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