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RE:첨삭답변드려요.
첨삭지기 | 2024.01.14 | 조회 35
해커스토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 문제 첨삭부탁드립니다.

Yes, I think that it is better to exercise outdoors.

for the following reasons

most of all, i can get a fresh air and I can see a nice view

for example one  In my case, a year ago i joined the running clud 

and once a week i running with my club member  

ran with the club members once a week

And I could get can got a fresh air and see a nice view as I ran.

therefore i think it is better to exercise outdoors.


-> 주어진 시간에 맞게끔 질문에 대한 답변을 충분히 준비하셔야 할 것 같습니다. 수고하셨습니다.


※ 이 게시글은 토익스피킹 점수예측서비스 참여자 답변에 대한 1:1 첨삭입니다.
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